Precipitation :: PG02

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“Tch,” the guard tuts at her smug expression and reaches the door to her cell.

The rattling of keys, locks, and the groan of an old cell door reverberates from slimy wall to sodden puddle and back again.

“Whatever,” he says, and roughly shoves the blue-skinned cambion into the cell before she can try anything, who stumbles to catch her balance—a task made difficult with her hands shackled behind her back, but one she succeeds in nonetheless. “Enjoy your last night, y’can spend it rotting in here with the other freak.” He punctuates this statement by slamming the cell door shut with a loud clang and the clatter of the lock slipping back into place, then he grins, “You’ll both be dead in the morning.”

With a laugh, he walks away, taking with him the warm lantern light and leaving behind a dank and dark cell. The air tastes foul, and smells it too—the ever present stench of wet fur and old waste singes at the nostril. The walls are slick with moisture and mildew, and a sewage grate lets in rainwater and who knows what else that pools in one corner of the room.

But her gaze is drawn towards the other corner, where a brown skinned woman sits huddled on a makeshift pile of loose, mouldering hay—the only comfort provided.

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Panel 1: Clink! Clat! Eeurrr! The guard begins to unlock a cell door. We see the blue figure’s manacle’d hands from behind the cell door, and the guard unlocking it.

Panel 2: Now we see their faces, though the guard’s eyes are obscured by his helmet, the blue horns and slight grin of the cambion figure is now clearly visible. “Whatever,” the guard says, “Enjoy your last night.”

Panel 3: The guard roughly shoves the cambion into the cell and the grin on her face drops, “Y’can spend it rotting in ’ere with the other freak.”

Panel 4: Clang! The door slams shut behind her and the guard dusts off his gloved hands.

Panel 5: A clearer closeup of the cambion woman. Her blank eyes and hair are white, with wild poofy sideburns framing her face. A black bandana holds much of it back, and the rest is tied at the ends into two ponytails or braids.

Panel 6: A wide shot of their jail cell. Warm light leaks in from the beyond the bars into the cold, grey and blue cell. The deep blue glow of the nighttime sky outside is barely visible through a high barred window and a sewer grate in the bottom corner, leaking in rainwater and whatever else. The walls look slick with mould and mildew, unused chains hanging on one wall, and in the corner the cambion sees a brown skinned woman atop a pile of mouldering hay.

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This comic is so amazing! I love the atmostphere and lighting and really aspire to create comics of my own like this. I often look at comics and just try and decipher how it's possible to merge both story and beautiful art and dynamic action into something so cohesive and seamless, but with T.H.O.T.S (amazing acronym btw, I just realized) you detailed how to do it in that one tutorial. Understanding how to break it down into beats from the prose and looking at the transcript for each panel finally helped clarify the thought process for me.

Thank you for making this comic so accessable, not only for readers but also for aspiring artists and creators who have so much to learn from your process. I've been working on making a comic for years but never had any success in getting that flow, and it was so frustrating when all the tutorials I found were about composition within a panel or layout of panels but not tying back to the prose source and how they chose what things to convey directly and what could be implied. But this comic and your tutorials have finally shed some light on the mystery of comic making and inspired me to pick it up again. Thank you so much for all your hard work! I'm so excited every time I see another page posted (:

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Oh gosh this is such a lovely comment!!! Thank you so much 🥺🥺 I totally understand the frustration!! It took me a long time to figure out how comics work, so I'm really glad to hear I was able to demystify things for you!! I actually hadn't even considered that including the prose would help with this haha, I included it to make things more accessible for visually impaired readers but now that you've mentioned it I might point over here in the tutorial for further examples!!

Anyway !! Thank you again I hope you'll enjoy where HotS goes from here <3 And best of luck with your own comics! And if you ever want any further advice you're more than welcome to contact me, and I'll either point you towards some resources I think will help or give some tips of my own :)

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SevWildfang
shes a freak cuz she can do some sick tech deck tricks, you see
Harrie
yeah she actually invented fingerboards but it wasnt the right era nobody even knows what a skateboard is yet so everyone got really mad about it and now she's here 😔
THE ATMOSPHERE IS SO GORGEOUSSSSS the detail on everything holy shit it’s amazing
Ah, the first meet-cute. They’ll tell stories about this
Harrie
THANK YOUUU nothing like meeting a hot girl in a jail cell amirite !
spiritoast
i'm a sucker for meet-cutes but something about meeting in jail specifically . million times more fun that way
also idk if this was on the last page and i just never noticed it but i love inclusion of prose and direct transcripts of the pages!!! 😭
Harrie
Hehe thank you !!! It was on the last page yeah it'll be there for every page! :)
Frith Ra (Guest)
Well, this looks interesting. So, who unties whom, first.
Harrie
Thank you! You'll just have to wait and see~! ^_^
wishjacked
mmmmmm colors so yummy tasty scrumptious... clear and complex at the same time...
Harrie
like a fancy broth... bwehh thank you Wish <3 🥺
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